
Storm at Midnight by Betty Ann Harris
Publisher: Red Rose Publishing
Genre: Erotic Romance

Summary: It’s raining Kisses, Hallelujah or is it?
Erin is venturing on a new vocation. Having just purchased a historic Inn, she is renovating the romantic inn. If her luck holds out, she plans on opening it as a bed and breakfast, with the help of her ruggedly handsome assistant, Darien.
They become immediate friends and work closely together. After one grueling day of work, the week before the inn is due to open, a violent storm catches them by surprise and sends Erin into Darien's strong and waiting arms. Will passion take over? Will the attraction between them grow and their friendship turn into love? Or will it peter out as if nothing happened?
My Review: This is a sweet story with potential. However, I found myself rewording it in my head as I read. The story is peppered with unneeded adverbs and the characters said each other’s names in every sentence of dialogue. Ms. Harris tells the story without showing. I didn’t feel one tug at my heart string.

I found aspects of the story unrealistic. I could buy the fact that they got caught in a thunderstorm, after all, who hasn’t. But to get caught in a tropical depression without warning? They should have been watching the storm for days in case it turned into a hurricane. The hero was also unrealistic in his speech and actions. While they were sweet and what every woman wants, Ms. Harris tried too hard to create a perfect man, which doesn’t exist.
I feel this story could have been a wonderful short piece if it had been written to show the story and a few tweaks done to the plot. If those elements had been worked out, the story would have gotten a higher rating.
Rated three Delightful Divas by Jasmine!

Publisher: Red Rose Publishing
Genre: Erotic Romance

Summary: It’s raining Kisses, Hallelujah or is it?
Erin is venturing on a new vocation. Having just purchased a historic Inn, she is renovating the romantic inn. If her luck holds out, she plans on opening it as a bed and breakfast, with the help of her ruggedly handsome assistant, Darien.
They become immediate friends and work closely together. After one grueling day of work, the week before the inn is due to open, a violent storm catches them by surprise and sends Erin into Darien's strong and waiting arms. Will passion take over? Will the attraction between them grow and their friendship turn into love? Or will it peter out as if nothing happened?
My Review: This is a sweet story with potential. However, I found myself rewording it in my head as I read. The story is peppered with unneeded adverbs and the characters said each other’s names in every sentence of dialogue. Ms. Harris tells the story without showing. I didn’t feel one tug at my heart string.

I found aspects of the story unrealistic. I could buy the fact that they got caught in a thunderstorm, after all, who hasn’t. But to get caught in a tropical depression without warning? They should have been watching the storm for days in case it turned into a hurricane. The hero was also unrealistic in his speech and actions. While they were sweet and what every woman wants, Ms. Harris tried too hard to create a perfect man, which doesn’t exist.
I feel this story could have been a wonderful short piece if it had been written to show the story and a few tweaks done to the plot. If those elements had been worked out, the story would have gotten a higher rating.
Rated three Delightful Divas by Jasmine!















































